Some people think that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while other people think it encourages crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that with the latest innovations in technology a significant reduction in crime rate is observed because of high surveillance, whiles others says that this technology is responsible for an increase in cyber-crime. While a negligible number of criminals do offenses using this technology, I believe that there are enormous ways in which technology enables law and enforcement agencies to overcome the crime rate.
On the one hand, on internet offenders make fake identities. These people are involved in identity theft and making transactions from the respective credit or visa cards. It is difficult to judge whether these are fake or real, these scammers are all over the world and use to loot innocent people. For example, UK Police reported a case in 2017 about online money theft, in which criminal made id associated with the international company’s website and they trap people from the world over. However, I believe that some crucial initiatives have been taken to overcome these situations such as there is a list which mentions about those groups and an alert that individuals must make sure before using credit cards online.
On the other hand, CCTV camera surveillance aids in monitoring each and every corner of the place. These cameras are installed in several spaces and monitored properly which aids in either catching red-handed or identification of criminals which was not possible without this technology. For example, in all over the world street crimes like kidnapping and mobile snatching were common thus there was no clue to catch criminals but in 2018 there is 25% reduction in crime is noted. I believe that without the invention of technology people will not feel safe about their lives and belongings and living a terrifying life.
To conclude, although there are some criminals who use technology in several crimes but on the whole invention of technology aids in controlling crime rate because of several devices and
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, such as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20062695925 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79471260234 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4131556853 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178528445255 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639445341418 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610614016329 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123728516522 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572398912098 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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