Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while other thinks that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factros? which, of all factors, do you think are most important?
In the contemporary era, every country is in the race to become most successful and independent among all the developed countries. Economic progress is the only way to measure country's success believed by some people but other suggest its not suffice and thinks there are other factors which should contribute to measure a country's success. which makes this conundrum topic mootable.
It is irrefutable to say that economic progress plays vital role while measuring country's success. Country's economy consist with many distinct attributes that includes, employment generation, efficient government policies, Surplus budget, positive balance of payments, strong relations with ally countries and many others. According to an article published in 'world forum'in 2019, an economic progress is not sole reason for an country's success, government should fathom into other factor like happiness index, improving gender equality, Building and maintaining old age homes, mitigating crime against women, better health system in country and improving conservatism political systems.
It is indispensable for government to think about other factor to be included to represent country's success. Even though, it is undeniable to say that economic progress also prominent for overall growth and better economic conditions proliferate the country's success overall.
According to my observation and understanding, considering old age homes, better health systems, advanced research programs and focusing on reducing crimes in the country's should be added while measuring an country's status. We know youngsters are the future of an economy but we also take care our older ones to represent our social values, beliefs and humanity.
To curtail the long story short, economic progress represent the major impact on country's success. On the contrary, officials should consider other factors too, so that country's success become everyone goal to achieve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: Which
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'allay'?
Suggestion: allay
...ance of payments, strong relations with ally countries and many others. According to...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'economic progress'.
Suggestion: economic progress
...rticle published in world forumin 2019, an economic progress is not sole reason for an countrys succ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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...ountrys should be added while measuring an countrys status. We know youngsters are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77700348432 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75838938793 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.1193821886 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444098736834 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177604006572 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152394836714 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266938909571 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148445027969 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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