Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include
Why you bought it
What you liked and disliked about it
Suggestions for improvement
Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well. This letter is regarding your one of fitness magazine 'Shape and fitness' of last weekend print and I would like to give some of my viewpoints on the same.
I am a professional body builder and it's been quite a long time that I have been reading your magazine because of it's authenticity, depth of research, surveys and information about nutrient and healthy diet tips.
I really appreciate and like the content, ideas for bodybuilding, separate page for healthy diet and providing free consultant for any fitness regarding query. However, I have some issues regarding the surveys and research articles done by company because company choose foreign participants for their every task and activity, which I personally do not like.
I would like to suggests some improvements pertaining to surveys and research, as company can start allowing local participants to enter into the company's competitions, surveys and research so that local audience of magazine can learn about their challenges and areas of improvement by reading your magazine. Additionally, it can also shoot up your magazine sale in local community.
I hope you will consider my suggestions.
Regards,
Sahil Sharma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-09-08 | sahilshell | 89 | view |
| 2020-04-01 | kjot_59 | 75 | view |
| 2020-03-26 | sohailahmad | 89 | view |
- In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by fast food This has a negative impact on families individuals and society To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Discuss both thes 73
- You ordered equipment online However when you received it it was damaged Send a letter to the manager of the company In your letter you should tell giving the details about the equipment explain the damage suggest what you want the manager to do 87
- Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged In your letter you should tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it 100
- You stayed over at a friend s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there Thank your friend Describe your watch Tell them what you want them to do 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'suggest'.
Suggestion: suggest
...sonally do not like. I would like to suggests some improvements pertaining to surveys...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, regarding, so, then, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26903553299 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9022129596 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.631845238 44.8134815571 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221811785994 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830484316222 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422599329818 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117451062199 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390481561201 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.