Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Worldwide many environmental issues exist, which must be solved in order to live a healthy life. Many people believe that all the nations should unite and address the problems, whilst others think that it can be handled more efficiently at individual nation level. This essay agrees that problem should be addressed at national level rather than globally. This essay will elaborate on both the point of view.
Each and every nation has its own related issues, which propagates to global level and forms bigger version of the issue. A problem area which exist in one country may not be faced by other countries. Cleanliness of the natural resources plays vital role in having good surrounding environment. For example, in India waste from factories is directly disposed into the natural water bodies, leaving it polluted. On the other hand, Singapore is known for its effective waste disposal technique, due to which it is able to keep its natural water resources clean.
There are many issues that exist at global level as well. For example global warming is proven to be most dangerous issue world is facing, due to which polar bears in North Antarctica is melting. According to various research, urbanization in various countries led to this problem.
In conclusion, every nation is facing its own hazards to nature and its collective effect is what world seeing at global level. Hence it is obvious that, if the issue is addressed at national level, its positive impact will be automatically seen at global level as well. Also, one nation can follow the effective method used by other nation for a common problem.
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- Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t is what world seeing at global level. Hence it is obvious that, if the issue is add...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02962962963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51209420284 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4300272381 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145995700793 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543674038159 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377048265962 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945935100981 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498011398247 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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