You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter> say where you think you left the papers>explain why they are so

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to bring to your knowledge about some important papers I left at hotel. Also I have a request to your hotel. Please allow me to provide more details on this.

I had booked the hotel from 18th sept to 20th sept for business purpose. My room number was 206. Due to some emergency at my home, there was sudden change in the plan and I had to return to my home. After which I realized that I have forgotten some important papers at the hotel room. You could find this papers inside the drawer near study table. This papers are very important as it hold the information about the important deal our organization is finalizing next week.

Please consider this as my humble request to and destroy the paper as it hold quite sensitive data about the company. Request you to kindly confirm once it’s done.

Gratefully yours,
Ashita

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... some important papers I left at hotel. Also I have a request to your hotel. Please ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he plan and I had to return to my home. After which I realized that I have forgotten ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'holds'?
Suggestion: holds
...e. This papers are very important as it hold the information about the important dea...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62658227848 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29955967166 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2612275264 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9166666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291609577297 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909073691534 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743964607839 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185831147792 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571976334852 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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