Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with nationally.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
My writing
The misperception of human has caused to the environment a myriad of destructions which is the reason for the natural problems, nowadays. It is thought by some that solving globally is the best, on the other hand, others believe it is better to deal with in each country.
First of all, it is necessary for people to be aware of the plague that environment can bring about. For example, global warming has caused a myriad of fatalities and ghastly effect on the living standard of many people. Having houses be submerged just by one night or losing the family members after flood is no longer queer to people in the effected area. These disaster is our last wake up call before the human destroy the entire nature.
Secondly, these consequences are all have the same reason, that is human's over exploited.Thus, everybody all over the world is responsible for these disasters or in other words, this is the global burden which affect not only one or two countries but every corner in it. They have to work with others in order to figure out the elaborate way to stop the problems from increasing and start to convert to be better.
Lastly,in order to make the global solution to be effective one, every single country need its own law to prevent people from making it even worse. They need to enact to make people be aware of their own responsibility in the preserving environment event and understand just very small unconscious deeds can cause a great consequence to our nature.
In conclusion, the environmental problems not only is the national responsibility but also is global one. So that, protecting our nature isn't a single duty but it is everyone's obligation. It is necessary for you to have your own deeds to protect it before to late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disaster' or 'These disasters'?
Suggestion: This disaster; These disasters
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...e reason, that is humans over exploited.Thus, everybody all over the world is respon...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...start to convert to be better. Lastly,in order to make the global solution to be...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...bal one. So that, protecting our nature isnt a single duty but it is everyones oblig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80456026059 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69829159189 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4220269152 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190672114092 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070186136955 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833972266696 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110168305912 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561230558606 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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