Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In recent time, the soaring crime rate is major concern. People are divided upon this issue. Some believe that it is government's responsibility while other believe that it is one's responsibility. This essay will discuss both of these view followed by my opine.
Firstly, the crime free society is not insurmountable. some believe that government has power to control the crime rate by enforcing the strict laws and extreme penalty to criminals. Secondly, the government has many departments like police force, intelligent bureau, and a team of expert criminal lawyers. With the help of such bodies potential crime can be identified earlier and corrective majors can be taken to have peace in society. Moreover, government can run many rehabilitation centers to council the criminals and help them to have good life.
On the other hand, few people believe that indulge in some criminal activity is individuals' choice irrespective of circumstances. In addition to that, strong determination, wisdom and counseling one can prevent it self from getting trapped in these criminal activities. For an instance, for a sack of few moment of enjoyment one should to consume the drugs and eventually it can lead them to indulge in criminal activity. This can be prevented with proper awareness of penalties, cause and effect of such activities on individual's social status and problem those can be faced by the family member of criminals.
To sum up, Crime free and peace full society is dream for both government and citizen. So, it should be the combined efforts from both citizen and government. One alone can not achieve significant success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...sibility while other believe that it is ones responsibility. This essay will discuss...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ime free society is not insurmountable. some believe that government has power to co...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
..., wisdom and counseling one can prevent it self from getting trapped in these criminal ...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun moment seems to be countable; consider using: 'few moments'.
Suggestion: few moments
...ivities. For an instance, for a sack of few moment of enjoyment one should to consume the ...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...n individuals social status and problem those can be faced by the family member of crimin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20377358491 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91602171241 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3054370028 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282178083403 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876902652852 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080335311626 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169797897166 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553625019569 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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