Some people think government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
according to some individuals, government should stop spending money on construction of theatres and sports stadium and more money should be put into health and education sector. I think the finances should be properly divided according to the importance of each sector. I will discuss my view points in upcoming paragraphs.
importance of the sectors plays an crucial role in deciding the budget. In many countries, health care is very poor. People are dying from the lack of proper medical attention. these countries should pay more attention to this sector instead of building theatres and stadiums. The health of the citizens should be their first priority. Moreover, the countries with low literacy rate should focus more on educating the citizens and give proper budget to this sector.
many countries already have proper health and education facilities. For instance, countries like UK, USA and Canada have a properly set up medical and education departments. Their citizens already excel worldwide in these fields. So make their countries do better in other sectors, they can afford to spend a healthy amount of budget on theatres and sports. this will help these nations to lead the world in all these sectors and become a powerful nation.
In conclusion, a country's budget should be decided by keeping all the aspects and national demands in mind. this will help in the further development of the nation.
- Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61895085706 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2659538365 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257117337016 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750495251754 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107736851671 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153629317513 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118412661475 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.