Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no question that making funding decisions is one of the most important topics for all national economies, especially when it comes to social sphere. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that government should invest in education and health care and reduce expenditure on sport objects and theatres. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement because I sure it should be a combination of both.
On the one hand, medical care and education are the basis for ensuring national well-being through social guarantees. Particularly, making investments in building or maintenance of hospitals and schools helps improving both health of a nation and economy. For example, if people are in good physical condition and high level of knowledge and experience, they become more effective at work. Hence, it provides an increasing in productivity and improvement in country’s economic performance.
On the other hand, culture and sport are also crucial for people. For instance, theatres and other kind of art objects are very important for saving traditions and making a legacy for descendants and future generation. Furthermore, visiting sport events are not only great entertainment today, but it also helps people to make positive health choices and lead a healthy lifestyle. In fact, health care and sports are closely interrelated and should work in complex.
Taking into consideration all mentioned above, I believe that the government should distribute the budget equally for objects of the entertainment industry and social sphere. it is obvious that all of them have a significant impact on both national culture and economy of any country in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...ntenance of hospitals and schools helps improving both health of a nation and economy. Fo...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...tertainment industry and social sphere. it is obvious that all of them have a sign...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4465648855 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00566884716 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4104343271 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162377741205 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581079538163 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529751059122 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953329878016 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330401306653 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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