Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of transport However others think money should be spent on other priorities e g environment cost Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is considered by a group of people that state should invest on projects that provides less time consuming means of transportation. However, the other group is more concerned more about environment that it should be focused more. In my opinion, environment must be the top concern, as it puts majors effects globally. In further I will discuss both views in detail.
Nowadays, a few people consider fast mode of transportation to be the top concern in which government should put funds. This can be essential but it results in carbon emission and fuel consumption as the more faster the vehicle is the more distance it will travel therefore, it will consume more fuel which will be destructive towards the environment. For example, the government of china started a train that was considered as the fastest train of world as it can travel with a great speed in less time, however, it required a lot of fuel to be operated.
Environment has a great impact on the whole world, as it can have both good and drastic effects on the globe. It is the vital role of government to practice projects that can maintain the ecosystem, moreover, it should put a positive impact on the environment. For example, the Netherland government has imposed environment friendly agreement to promote nature balance and better environment i.e. restricting the use of plastic and arranging alternatives for plastic products and promoting use of bicycles in country wide. Therefore, I believe that instead of our ease we should focus more on things that can benefit our overall environment and nature.
In conclusion, some people emphasis more on government to put funds in fast transportation while others believe that our first priority should be more towards environment. In my opinion, swift transport can have some importance but environment should be the main concern of governments. As, it plays an important impact on the globe.
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Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it required a lot of fuel to be operated Environment has a great impact on the wh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95283018868 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83639605789 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459119496855 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 318.0 20.2975951904 1567% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1575.0 106.682146367 1476% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 318.0 20.7667163134 1531% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 112.0 7.06120827912 1586% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275594869173 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.275594869173 0.084324248473 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194308986503 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778433561746 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 160.9 13.0946893788 1229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -251.29 50.2224549098 -500% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 127.3 11.3001002004 1127% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.91 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.89 8.58950901804 266% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 129.2 10.1190380762 1277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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