Since people work to acquire a suitable remuneration for the purpose of having a comfortable life, they have to work until the mid of their sixties in order to get a pension. Some people believe that particular professions deserve an early retirement and it will be unjust to have a fixed age for all kinds of jobs. In this essay, I will say why I agree with this opinion and what are the occupations that should consider early retirement.
In my point of view, I vehemently agree with this opinion due to several reasons. Firstly, employees cannot exert the same amount of effort in their late ages, as a result of this, many flaws could occur during work which will affect the quality of the final product. Secondly, various types of jobs require immensely precise movements that can become quite tough on the oldsters. Finally, the work which invariably requires a continuous movement is not opportune for old people who can barely walk.
Furthermore, the professions that depend on the physical effort or nuanced movements are the most appropriate to avail from early retirement. Building workers, for instance, are required to use their body potential in their work daily, so the older they get, the less productive they become. Another example, the doctors who operate meticulous surgeries, not only are they required to control their movements precisely, but they also need to be in full concentration for a long period. Owing to the fact that this will be extremely difficult to achieve by oldsters, their corporates should offer them early retirement and grant them some money to cover their living expenses.
To sum up, it will be unfair for certain occupations to keep its employees working until their sixties because they will be incapable of bearing the work conditions. In addition, if their profession depends on physical effort or precise actions, they will not be suitable people for the job anymore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e mid of their sixties in order to get a pension. Some people believe that partic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01246105919 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63672155158 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576323987539 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4762999612 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.769230769 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201780332383 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749745281466 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690581146317 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131945958273 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704126088151 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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