Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered to be challenged for employees to acquire a SUCCESSFUL career that COULD meet both job satisfaction and expected income. Hence, there has been a heated debate as to whether having a FRIENDLY AND HIGHLY COLLABORATIVE working environment, or having a well-paid package is more imperative. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide FIRM evidence why a positive working condition is superior.
On the one hand, securing a HIGH-INCOME job could greatly help the workers TO PAY necessary expenses, despite the fact that it might also bring negative aspect on SERIOUS mental ISSUE. In other words, if a person can earn a relatively high SALARY, then he or she will be able to easily cover primary basic needs including DAILY foods, shelter and utilities BILLS. However, LUCRATIVE occupations often consist tight working schedules or strict deadlines, which can cause PROBLEMATIC mental illness to the staffs. Professional auditors, for instance, are believed to RECEIVE HIGH-PAYING WAGES; HOWEVER, THEY might SUFFER SEVERED MENTALITY PROBLEMS SUCH AS MIGRAINE from stressful WORKING atmosphere.
On the other hand, experiencing a harmonious atmosphere at the workplace might be effective for employees to be motivated at work, thereby boosting their working performance. That is to say, not only the workers can effectively collaborate with colleagues, but they will also be encouraged and supported by the firms. For example, an individual may find himself or herself being passionate when team-working with supportive and friendly co-workers; therefore, the productivity of works will be immensely increased. Furthermore, it is undeniable that after a dedicated period of passionately contribute to the firms, they will likely receive a pay rise.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reasons why having a good working environment is important including working motivation and long run financial benefit, as well as achieving desired salary packages. In my opinion, the first latter is more essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
.... Hence, there has been a heated debate as to whether having a FRIENDLY AND HIGHLY COLLABORAT...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52715654952 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02716624376 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658146964856 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.128221931 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.076923077 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6923076923 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224276468357 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747228089329 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052226482129 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140430285492 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413829759505 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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