These days few countries are already affluent and wealthy, however, they do not stop at that and continue their efforts to gain richness and improve their economics. Some feel that these countries should put a stop at acquiring wealth as their citizens won't get any happier, while conversely, another school of though have contradictory opinion. Considering the rapid changes in technology and society, I definitely agree that until the country has resources at their disposal they should not refrain from acquiring richness.
To begin with, in order to enforce a superpower status and establish a dominance over the world, countries are in a rat race to stabilize their GDP. In doing so, they fail to acknowledge the grievances and plight of the general public. According to a recently documented survey, almost 35% of the population in developed countries are below poverty line and 75% among them are homeless. Therefore, once a country is financially stable they should divert their attention towards the well-being and progress of their citizens.
On the other hand, due to the boom in technology and research, any country can work it's way towards becoming a number one position. Countries who were earlier considered backwards and under-developed are now making waves in the field of science and development and putting themselves on the world map along with ensuring a better standard of living for their citizens. For example, in Singapore their ports provide a major contribution to their income and hence, they are constantly trying to improve their services all in all making it the second busiest port in the world.
To recapitulate, the concept of rich country is exaggerated, for once they stop striving for richness they will be immediately replaced. Moreover, I totally believe that if a country gets richer, it's citizens can benefit since the country will be able to provide better education, healthcare and other essentials facilities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...wledge the grievances and plight of the general public. According to a recently documented sur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24840764331 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83074982107 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.4866642955 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156450222245 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601537038558 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328198420264 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972135852144 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303743565633 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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