Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The ownership of private vehicles continues to increase, and this is contributing to the decay of the air quality in many cities. While the global promoting of a day without the use of cars is considered a good solution, I believe that there are better ways to address this problem.
On the one hand, it is clear that the excessive number of vehicles circulating every day accounts for a significant amount of carbon emissions. International campaigns for car-free days contribute to the decrease of pollutants levels emitted into the atmosphere, thus improving the air quality in congested cities. For example, in Buenos Aires the regular promotion of no-car days has been identified as a critical reason for the significant improvement on the decrease of air contamination, especially in neighbourhoods located next to busy roads. Moreover, these events are likely to raise people’s awareness of the issue, increasing the search for alternative options of transportation, even on ordinary days.
On the other hand, there are other effective measures to tackle the problem. One feasible way is to increase the cost of fuel by applying more taxes. Concerned about the significant financial impact provoked, many drivers are expected to reduce the use of vehicles, mainly when considering short distances. Therefore, a considerable reduction of cars on the road is achieved every day, bringing about benefits to the atmosphere. Another solution is to increase the implementation of mandatory road space rationing in cities. For instance, London has already adopted the mandatory driving restriction during weekdays, and since then, the levels of pollutants in urban areas have considerably reduced.
In conclusion, the promotion of free-car days shows good results in tackling the problem of air quality. However, I believe that imposing restrictions on daily driving and increasing the prices of fossil fuels are alternative ways that generate considerably more improvements.
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- You are looking for a part time job at a football club Write a letter to the manager of the football club In your letter introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him her when you think you could start 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49346405229 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11745008353 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4457036118 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174066758538 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597665558831 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480524488791 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102318085744 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112951624451 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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