Some people think that it is better to build more public parks and sports facilities in new towns rather than shopping malls. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that it would be a better idea to establish parks and exercise facilities instead of shopping malls in new urban areas. This essay is in agreement with the above-mentioned notion.
To begin with, the supporters of the shopping malls suggest that these malls play a vital in the economy of the area. A mall is basically a hub of different brands and shops which enable employers to hire hundreds of local people from sweeper to manager as well as sale staff to increase the sales of their malls. This, in turn, leads to an increase in the revenue of the area and people paying taxes will increase. Furthermore, people will be able to access the market, and latest brands in the local area also increase the profit of the mall and indirectly increase the revenue of the government.
However, the benefits of the parks and sports facilities cannot be overlooked for economic factors. With the advent of time, schedules have changed a lot and the life of people have become busier which left no time for pass time and health. Moreover, technological advancement has made it easy to buy things online through various sites such as Amazon, Myntra, or Flipkart within few clicks even at the most distant places which were earlier inaccessible. However, the parks and sports facilities in the local area will encourage people towards better health without spending a penny. Well maintained parks with beautiful landscapes and having open gyms instill with enthusiasm to work out and become healthy. Furthermore, these parts can become an indispensable part of life for elderlies, and children are not able to travel or join any gym. For instance, Chandigarh is a union territory where around 90 percent of the parks are equipped with gym machines to encourage people to be fit.
To conclude, no doubt malls succor the economy of the area to uplift even so I believe that the health of the people overrules the economy. The parks and exercise facilities encourage people to gain health while enjoying the natural landscape.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, even so, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91594202899 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60356016252 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544927536232 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2322725805 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175684329335 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653107254777 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566997656877 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116365353357 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229558277961 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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