Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been noticed that adults spend most of their time in a job and a job is of extreme importance for better livelihood. Strata of populace reiterate that job satisfaction is immensely significant as compared to job security. Contrarily, opponent deems that individual should possess a long-lasting job to relish life. This essay intends to discuss both the conflicting ideas with relevant examples prior to my perspective.
The benefits of a permanent job cannot be overlooked. To begin with, a permanent job enables an individual a stable and carefree life because of the financial support. People hardly care about financial problems or job security and perform their tasks generously owing to a tension-free environment. However, permanent job has some lacking such as the same job for a long time does not develop the growth in one’s career and unaware of the use of new technology such as computers. For instance, in the government jobs people stick to the work assigned to them, so they lack the opportunity of exploring themselves hence, their life becomes monotonous and apathy.
On the other hand, job satisfaction and fulfillment are more significant and people can assign more energy and time in their interest. People are inclined to come up with new and creative ideas that can be beneficial not only for the company but for the employees. The productivity and efficiency of the work will be high as they feel pleasure through the senses of achievement and in turn led them to work hard for success. For instance, as per the report published by Time Jobs, it has been noticed that people who are working for job satisfaction are 78 percent more likely to happy and productive than people holding a permanent job.
To conclude, in my opinion, job satisfaction is certainly overruled money earned. If people will be interested in a job they will definitely get better opportunities and growth in their respective jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04037267081 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91547429337 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549689440994 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3185096726 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409925620749 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151930942239 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853543143893 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254774040637 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340161256504 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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