Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is thought by a few individuals that boys and girls ought to get an education in a single-sex school, while others argue and think that there are more advantages of studying in a co-educational institute. Although people often consider educating male and female students in separate institutes is significant, in my opinion, I believe that it is potentially beneficial for boys and girls to study in a mixed school.
On the one hand, it is considered that boys and girls greatly benefit from studying in a single-sex educational institute. As sometimes, students get distracted by opposite gender during an important lecture, so while studying separately it will allow them to concentrate better, which consequently produce good results. For example, a research done by the students of Oxford University stated that in Pakistan, approximately 90% of students who received more than 90% marks in their 10th grade board exams, studied in separate schools.
On the other hand, providing education to students in a mixed school is considered to be more advantageous which I agree, as it helps them to improve their communication skills with opposite genders. In other words, when boys and girls are studying together they mostly get involved in group discussions, which as a result remove any hesitation of initiating a conversation with opposite-sex students. Moreover, this skill also helps them in their practical life. For instance, a recent journal produced by Times Magazine stated that approximately 50% of employees have gain promotions in a very short time because of better communication skill which they develop during their studies in co-educational institutes.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I consider that there are more positive aspects of learning in a mixed school as it allows a student to develop communication skills which are beneficial for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32450331126 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08248090382 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6418084796 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.8 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221644714086 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981929193383 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768271071931 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147679445282 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797899301845 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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