Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some group of people believes a sports played as a team has more advantages than a solo participation sports that other group of people thinks it has more beneficial. Playing with a group of players builds more involvement. On the other hand single play game makes a person eccentric in that game. In this essay, i will try to discuss both the views in details with my perception.
Undoubtedly, playing with a bunch of people put together in one team makes you to develop many aspects such as team work, deep involvement, motivation and participation to achieve the goal or in other words win the game. For an instance, Cricket is a famous sport that is widely played in England having 11 people in a team thriving to win the other team with the same head count. Whereas, an individual sports is like struggling to dominate the talent between two people. Of course, it makes us to be more proactive to construct the technique to win the counterpart on the fly of the game. For example, Ping-pong, an individual sports, that is played individually with the other person as an opponent.
In my opinion, every sports may it could be a team or a single, is like a double-edge sword having positive and negative advantages. At the end, it is all about how we tackle the hurdles to win the game.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
Some group of people believes a sports played as a team has more advantages th...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... eccentric in that game. In this essay, i will try to discuss both the views in d...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he other team with the same head count. Whereas, an individual sports is like strugglin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, whereas, for example, of course, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57939914163 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65471373587 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4752654173 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222678018341 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827566137448 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061865584227 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145556835289 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067835652403 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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