You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There are different types of sports some can be played as a team and some can be played as an individual. Some people have an opinion that team sport is better than a sport that is played individually. This essay will discuss both views and in the end I would also give my opinion.
People think that team sport is better than an individual game as it helps the person to learn important skills like co-ordination. For example, in football players have to co-ordinate among each other and place a goal, this is same in real world as well if you are working on a particular task you and your stakeholder need to work together to achieve that particular goal. Playing a team sport build you as a person with co-ordination.
There is another view point which needs equal attention i.e. individual sport is better, there are couple of points to this one of them would be, individual sport you win or loose because of your efforts and the result is purely reflection of your talent and hardwork. For example if you are playing tennis or chess your hardwork decides your destiny, your wrong move you pay for it, whereas in team sport if you play well and even if a single player does not play well it might cost the entire team a big time. People feel that individual sport gives them a sense of freedom and allows them to play in their own style.
In my opinion I feel team sports is more beneficial as learning important values like building trust, clear communication, co-ordination, and many more qualities make up the person playing as a team. Team sport as well as individual sport has its own benefits as it completely depends on the person to choose his priority while selecting a sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...u play well and even if a single player doesnt play well it might cost the entire team...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, i feel, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60066006601 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5307485046 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528052805281 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3460599678 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198387690621 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882806503674 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325392678413 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127109252608 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201891626433 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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