Some people think that it is a very good idea to bring your family when travelling overseas for work or study reasons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages? What is your opinion.
Numerous opportunities in life comes our way which call us to go abroad. At that point of time, taking family along becomes a matter of choice and comes with a long list of benefits and challenges. This essay shall explain arguments for both sides of the coin to aid readers come to their own conclusion
To initiate, travelling along with family can be immensely advantageous. People usually feel homesick when they are distance apart from their close ones which will not be the case if family comes down. Another relatively known feature that warrants favoring family is the education opportunities that siblings can receive. Undeniably, studying abroad in a reputed University can add a great deal of points in ones future career.
After considering the above salient reasons, the drawbacks now merit some meaningful discussion. The more pleasurable it looks to live abroad, the more expensive it is. In foreign countries usually each member of the house do at least some work to bear their expense and provide financial support to the family. Additionally, family can distract too leading to less focus on work and study. For example, misbehaving children or emotional husband could result to a employee performing substandard work.
By and large, family plays a vital role in human's life and therefore should be present around to get that personal touch in a strange and new country. However, the choice varies from person-to-person depending on the priorities one consider
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, at least, for example, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74238238709 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661818181818 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2355922342 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12226185019 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393817870579 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279515235187 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645938443557 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414277411253 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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