Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantage outweighs the disadvantage?
With the advancement of living style, it has commonly been noticed that industries are now moving to rural areas and some people agree to it instead to urban area. This essay shall discuss the benefits and drawbacks with logical conclusion.
To begin with, the migration of industries towards outskirts of cities are beneficial, as it creates the opportunity for the employment for the people over there who cannot relocate to city. Among all, cheap labors are easily available in back country. Also, plethora of manufacturing units emit poisonous gases and creates lot of noise leading to air pollution and noise pollution which hampers the lives of population. For instance, Tata Nano opened its first manufacturing plant in rural areas of Ahmedabad giving bread and butter to cluster of people. Moreover, industries like TATA steel in Jamshedpur had its manufacturing unit in city in urban area has now relocated the entire unit to suburbs saving people from harmful diseases.
On the other hand, the obvious disadvantage is the commuting time from city to rural areas. Those who are living very far from woodland face lot of difficulty in travelling making difficult to work on time management and the conveyance facility to these areas are least available. In case of emergency a family cannot expect anyone from company to be there on time. Although, offices provides meal provisions, cannot get any other favorite food to eat from outside. Besides, the presence of raw material is another challenge for companies that impacts the production of goods. For example, in Gurugram most of the companies are situated very far from city making travel time more than 4hours a day. Food brands like dominos are rarely available in these areas. Thus, drawback cannot be overlooked.
To conclude, I would rather say when companies gets situated in rural areas helps entrepreneurs to flourish their business without threatening the environment and creating job opportunity that overweighs the demerits in urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24691358025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71174602968 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9623450646 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160006420955 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483663677666 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475258719257 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987331405453 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251935418343 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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