Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
Keeping pets is always remain a debatable issue among people because of health issues and danger rendered by these living beings.A number of people are of the notion that animals/birds as pets make great companion with kids which I also agree.In this essay, I Shall discuss some of the potential reasons of why pets are beneficial along with some adverse effects they may cause in case of negligence, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To embark upon, children have a special attraction and affection towards their pet, as they are lovely creatures and offers a plethora of benefits. Firstly, young ones stay happy with pets at home; they remain more active in comparison to those who don't have one. Secondly, pets also have a special corner for their owners in their heart, which sometimes had been seen in real life that pet such as dog protected children from a deadly situation. For Instance, a study at the University of Columbia revealed that pets have some extra sensory capability that they can predict natural disasters before happening and can guide their owner to a safer place. Once such examples came into the picture, where one pet dog saved the life of his owner child by evacuating him from building just 5 minutes before an earthquake.
Moreover, children learn the lesson of being loyal from pets such as a dog, which often being considered as the symbol of loyalty. Such lessons make children a better person in the future.
Nevertheless, these pets proved out to be dangerous on a number of times. Not everyone is an expert in understanding animal behavior, which sometimes results in cases such as animal biting. In other words, children are more prone to animal attacks because they are naive of understanding animals. In Addition, if pets vaccination and hygiene are not taken care of on time, they can cause many diseases. To illustrate it, pets not trained to excrete at a particular place, cause health issue for children at home. Therefore, it is important for the parent to take measures before having pets for their children.
To recapitulate, I agree with the opinion that pets are good companions for children and have many advantages. However, parents should train their pets and children to avoid unexpected accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98677248677 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60242305364 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.0110057213 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231121218721 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805898430782 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599769607546 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144662246548 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512933074587 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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