Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that whether we are more or less of dependent on others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.
There are some argue of why modern world makes us become independent and vice versa. On the one hand, we have depended on social media and technologies for a long time because of its quality. Thus, we tend to accomplish things all by ourselves and avoid asking others for help. Therefore, we have less of communities with each other as well as downscale social skills and they might be isolated from society. In contrast, modern life comes with self-reliance as well as confident in order to solve problem, still modern life increase competition between each other.
On the other hand, when everything is easily to get, it may lead to the feeling of frustrated when we face to harsh situation. In that case, we will find others to help us overcome our own problem. Therefore, we easily to give up without support, or when we realize that technologies are no longer supportive for us. Look at the bright side, we are able to connect with others all around the world, they could strengthen the relationship between parents and infants or husband and wife. For example, a family cannot be happy if there are no help and interaction between husband and wife.
In conclusion, modern life lead us become both independent and dependent. Personally, I believe that we tend to isolate ourselves from connect with people in society nowadays than ever

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, in my view, more or less, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79389312977 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61040800259 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1176361454 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300491253605 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104998646239 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630668003781 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192804056477 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764287506035 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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