Trying to define happiness is not an easy task. Most of us would probably agree that happiness is a feeling that life is good and that our sorrundings are a bit brighter and more beatirful than usual. For our ancestors, being happy was not a priority. While the concept of happiness has been around for thousands of years, we humans were simply struggling to survive so that thinking about quality of life was a luxury. Things have changed nowadays: most of us regard happiness as something we have a riht to and therefore something to be actively pursued.
Due to several research carried out throughout past decades, economists and social scientists have noticed that increased wealth alone does not seem to be making people happier. Other factors, like personal relationships, work satisfaction and mental health are more important for individuals as much we earn. As societies, we are happier if social trust, freedom and generosity dominate.
There is no doubt that life without money would be - especially in developed countries - extremely tough. Money is essential to buy food, to provide medical care and to pay a rent or a mortgage. In one world it is necessary to survive. Whether being reich does actually people happier is still up for debate. I think that being well-off allows us to increase our quality of life, but other factors that are nor for sale like health, love, kindess and friendships are more critical to gain satisfaction and living a fulfilled life.
- Some people claim that censorship is necessary because there are too many undesirable contents in the mass media while others argue that it will hinder information freedom Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or remotely rather than going into an office each day Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide What is the cause of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough 60
- Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some research'.
Suggestion: some research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97983870968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71653013972 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641129032258 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2764128704 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256538110096 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792061020456 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034810362408 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147659277226 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626001993466 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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