Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Can people be happy without much money? What other factors contribute to happiness?
Some individuals believe that happiness strictly depend on money. Although, money is one of the important factors for a comfortable and peaceful life, the importance of well-being has not been ignored.
To begin with, it is understandable why some people opine that money can increase the joyful in the life. Firstly, being wealthy helps you to upgrade their life style. In fact, everybody needs money to provide life’s necessity including accommodation, transport, suitable nutrition and education. Moreover; to make a pleasure life, people require money to spend for entrainment activities such as going to the cinema, theme park, swimming pool, gym and other activities. As research shows developing countries where individuals are not able to provide amenities for themselves and families suffer from more mental disorders like anxiety and depression than prosperous countries.
Nevertheless, definitely, other items particularly well-being play an essential role in promoting happiness in life. To illustrate this vividly, there are some wealthy people that suffer from a physical disability such as paralysis, blindness or a devastating illness such as cancer. Most of them wish to achieve their health by spending all their wealth. Even more, there are some rich individuals who their own or loved one’s struggle with some intellectual and mental disorders. Unfortunately, their fortune can not help them to cure and most of them suffer from sadness.
To conclude, I personally think money increase the happiness in the everybody life. However, the priority of pleasure would be provided by physical and mental health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57831325301 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94393672474 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630522088353 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.560641011 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305233340779 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101822075094 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800369229895 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190838628805 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497895788102 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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