It is considered by some that instead of being in prison , some offernders should work free of charge to aid others in society. From my perspective, I completely agree to this proposition, and this solution is beneficial to society.
Firstly, it is undeniable fact that a offender is someone who did not abide by the lows, who brought the damage for society, so, why shouldn't the government enslave a prisoners to amend the damage? . It is worth underscoring that the community is necessary volunteers to do some unpaid job, giving rise the financial state circumstance. Moreover, considering every prison as a danger is an absurdity, some carried out the detrimental gestures and ready to wash away guilty, the government should maintain these desires. Therefore, not dangerous offenders must enforce to work for washing away guiltiest , bringing benefits to society.
Secondly, there is no doubts that a physical job will be an essential approach to reshaping of criminals, in resulting in an increase in the positive personal character traits of the individuals, such as persistence also it will a significant feature to teaching them to respect surrounding people, to be hard-worker, to appreciate other's work . For instance, a person who is an yard keeper will not litter on the street. As a result, a working process aids to shape personal values of criminal people. In addition, a physical work is beneficial compared to be without movements.
In conclusion, certainly prisoners should be encouraged to carry out a job which will acquire a profit to any society. Instead of developing negative traits,a physical work forms a positive traits, and a physical work assists them to be healthy.
- There is certainly a difference in thoughts ideas and actions between children their parents and grandparents Why do these differences exist Does it cause problems in your community in your opinion 95
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- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society? 84
- Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? 56
- Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04715997291 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7465157623 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226465714856 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823346367493 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674484500988 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140811500058 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637366427042 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.