Fashionable clothes and products have not been out of trend, this is proved that people enjoy imitating each other, purchasing identical products, clothes. From my perspective, this proposition is completely true.
It seems undeniable that adults encourage their children to obey the rules of the society, children are accustomed to subject the rules from an early age. When they grew up , the surrounding environment again requires to be suitable the defined restricted conditions, and as a result, the majority of people have subjected these limits. Thus they aim to possess the similar items, they make an attempt to be acceptable to the community, resulting in an increase in the demands for fashionable clothes, goods, properties . For instance, a person, who is an artist, will not wear cheaper clothes because the masses will not acknowledge this artist, consequently, this loses the popularity. Moreover, nowadays advertisements essentially urge people to buy luxuries, exerting a consuming impact on society. Compared to the time without advertising, these days people follow trends by advertisements, given rise the consumer society of the similar goods. For example, if television broadcasts information about advanced cars, numerous people will acquire this model of car. In addition, it is worth remarking jealousy is most common personality trait , persons enjoy having the same things as the famous neighbors have, hence people copy one another. Therefore, adjusting to surrounding community, an advertisement influence, jealousy lead to the tendency of buying the same products.
Nevertheless, there is no doubts that some people do not approve the imposed community rules, instead of purchase analogical products, they opt the own strategy, do not intend to be similar fashion. I am of opinion that these contribute the development of society. As a consequence , there are personalities chosen specific strategical direction of lives do not be swayed by some.
In conclusion, a great proportion of people strive to be appropriately related to close neighbors, advertising engage people in one fashion style, personal trait is jealousy causes a desire obtaining similar goods. However, some individuals do not enjoy considering common, conventional tendencies , they alter the tendency of similarity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11318458659 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631428571429 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8944926535 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.9375 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1655096807 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498467090752 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034586271256 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101403637782 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349684544078 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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