Whether felons should be kept in prison or should be permitted to work without wage in community has been always a controversial notion. This essay will discuss the reason felonies should be permitted to work in community. This essay will discuss why they should avoid to work and my opinion.
To begin, most of the felons that are imprison have committed felony. But not all of them have perpetrated one advertently. For instance, imagine a culprit that accidentally hit a person that suddenly walks right in the pathway of a driver. It’s natural that the driver will hit the pedestrian and an untoward accident happens. The innocent driver will go to prison. Although, he or she didn’t commit the occurrence on purpose.
Nevertheless, such felonies shouldn’t be kept in jail. They should be used as labor in community. Because it’s not fair to keep them as a prisoner. On the other hand, if a felony is guilty due to a serious crime, he or she should be kept in prison to avoid jeopardize community's inhabitants. Such as murderers that it’s a must to kept in prison. Or as another instance, if the felony is a robber should be allowed to work in the community shouldn’t work without any observance. They should work under strict supervisions by prison’s guards so that they don’t commit and other crime or even escape.
To put in nutshell, decision to make about felonies to be kept in prison or to appoint as worker in community directly depend to the kind of crime that the culprit committed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'imprisoned'.
Suggestion: imprisoned
... To begin, most of the felons that are imprison have committed felony. But not all of t...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd of crime that the culprit committed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90598314511 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509578544061 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2017403951 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215827706065 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768176063224 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668484723773 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12701719886 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877086890766 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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