Some people think that In order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Efficient transportation system is difficult to manage in the majority of the nations. Many individuals believe that boosting residence in city areas instead of rural regions can solve the difficulties of traffic and conveyance system. I am of the opinion, that gathering all the people to urban regions will make the problem more complex, therefore I completely disagree with the idea to bring people in cities
Firstly, the cities have a better transportation system as compare with rural transport, but allotting all the people to one place will make the city more crowded and difficult to move. Merging of city and rural people will make it difficult to move the traffic as with the addition of individuals, the number of vehicles will be increased especially in terms of personal conveyance. Hence, making more traffic jams mainly during office hours. For instance, the admission of villagers in the Delhi Metro system has made the commuter over-crowded and congested.
Secondly, poor quality life, accommodating all the people together with greater the risk of accidents. Chaos to manage such complex traffic management results the potential to higher accidental risk, to overcome such impacts government needs to increase the number of routes for daily commuting and increase the traffic controls by implanting more signals, thus resulting in more complex structures and a chance of failures. For instance, the metro cities have often recorded with a higher number of incidences. However, with the addition of people from villages will simply make the situation worse.
In conclusion, merging of city and rural people will make it overcrowded city highways and the problems of traffic will enhance because of the rise in a number of vehicles on road. Thus hampering the traffic control system. Therefore, I believe we should try to develop village sectors instead of coupling villagers with urban citizens.
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- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 73
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- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since there is computer technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77447361869 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.6371569398 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185173867922 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663888997174 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519607084264 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132145154161 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375532846619 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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