Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to
learn this.
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Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Learning how to live in a society and acquiring the skills are key for every child. Although, some people especially sociologists who are experienced are of the opinion that family is the mainstream of breeding children for the society; however, it is obvious that the educational environment has a certain role in this subject. I tend to agree with both ideas because both of these factors are of paramount importance.
Considering parent's behavior, children are highly influenced by their parent's manner and way of thinking. In other words, the first and most important place to learn the initial social skills is in the home which parents can teach their children how to act in society. parents are the keyfactor in educating their children in every stage of life. However, These skills may not be sufficient sometimes or even wrong. Therefore, another source of education is highly recommended.
Moving to the second point, schools are the suitable place for achieving more complicated skills. For example, how to find the precocious talent of the students at an early age and schedule constant programs to develop that particular skill. ironically, most families are much more occupied by their jobs, therefore, schools are the best option to improve the social ability and interest of the children.
To sum up, deciding whether the family place or the educational environment is more effective on children to be a reliable citizen in a community is pretty difficult. Because both sides are decisive and cannot be distinguished in any orders
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Parents
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Suggestion: Ironically
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15079365079 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79876425958 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7020366303 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242700280872 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761868413519 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410992378053 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13274136346 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477727563798 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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