Many of prison sentences have a profound impact on society's safety. However, some individuals insist that imprisonment in prison should be replaced with educational programs, absolutely this idea could help in many cases but not for all crimes.
Above all, jail is necessary for many violent acts and it is not replacing by another punishment. For example, people who commit horrible crimes such as murder, rape or child abuse should lockout in jail permanently, this kind of person never can change their behavior and people must be protected from them.
In addition, many crimes if governments do not take serious action against them would cause lots of problems in societies and countries. Obviously, crimes related to the drug or guns are very offensive and it could lead an individual’s lives in danger. As an illustration, gangsters' activities in cities’ streets have always been aggressive and sometimes they are fighting with guns and it has collateral damage all the time like killing passersby on the street.
Although, killing or robbing people with weapons are unforgettable crimes and should punish them by putting them in jail for long periods of time, many crimes are caused by accidents or circumstances. For instance, men or women who commit murder in order to Self Defense for saving their families live should not take prison sentences, they can work in charities or attend social education programs instead of spending their lives in an unpleasant prison environment with other prisoners.
In conclusion, in from point of my view, many crimes are caused by the accidental situation and those people are not naturally criminals, besides other horrible actions should be punishing by the government for making a safer place to live for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24561403509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81487059391 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3171169458 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.5 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175661045962 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697178422001 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569461798285 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107582336062 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538508568818 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.