Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead.
To what extent do you agree on disagree?
Imprisonment is a hotly-debated topic which often divides the opinion. A loin's share of society favors it, however rest go averse it. The following paragraph would shed some light on my personal prospective with an apt example.
I do not see eye to eye with the central idea, to begin with punishment there should be strict laws for any crime be it a minor one or big. Thankfully our judiciary system does have them in place. Now comes the type of crime, some crimes are actually too brutal that in such cases court has to take strict action, and give the offender an appropriate punishment. For instance, if a person has murdered his whole family after the months of planning for money or property. The family which had provided him premium education and he was already in a reputed job. In such cases, person is not committing crime because he is not educated or he has less knowledge about anything this is beyond humanity and shall be treated strictly.
Secondly, another factor which should be considered closely is motive and intentions. Although a crime is committed by a juvenile, which will be considered as a young child. But if his intentions and motive is very clear, and he has not done that crime under any influence and was a planned activity. Then I believe it should not be counted as a special case and instead of giving him education and job training strict imprisonment shall be granted. As this kind of kid could be a threat to other prisoners as well those who are better and can improve themselves shall interact with him.
Lastly, mental health is another point which should be taken in count. Suppose a crime is done by a person who is not mentally sound then we can treat that case with leniency but otherwise the offender should be given imprisonment as per the law without any mercy.
Taking everything into consideration, my personal view points on punishment are there should be strict laws and rules for criminals, specially those are the threat to our society. Providing them education and training cannot help alone. Keeping subjectivity in mind we cannot say that one solution fits all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80216802168 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60783754867 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574525745257 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6328804326 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2631578947 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237338969924 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703515647844 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695676906424 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129825988499 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602662507077 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.