The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Nuclear power has emerged as one of the most discussed issues of the contemporary era. Although it has some advantages, still its inevitable drawbacks cannot be ignored. This essay will highlight that disadvantages of nuclear sources has surpass the advantages brought by it.
First and foremost, the statement that how the fear of using nuclear weapons on each other is maintaining the calmness between enemy countries is completely incorrect. In fact this can bring the most dangerous situation in future where both opposition countries are holding nuclear weapon and can use it on each other. Despite the fact that they both are loosing, in such situation this can never bring peace between them. On the other hand, if only one country among two enemies would be having nuclear bomb them it can rule over the other less powerful economy easily. According to experts power can never bring peace among opponents especially if it is a nuclear power.
Finally, producing nuclear energy could be reasonable and less costly but a slight mishappening can bring a devastating results. Hence what matter first is the safety and well-being of humans and other living organisms, on which this whole concept of inventions and discovery has based. Instead of thinking about cost we should consider about living beings safety first for that there are ample of other cheap and reliable options that can generate the electricity for us without harming anyone.
To sum up, I would like to say a negative thing can never bring harmony to this world despite of few advantages. All things considered, nuclear invention is a curse to this society rather than a blessing.
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| 2019-08-08 | Monika Goswami | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'surpassed'.
Suggestion: surpassed
...at disadvantages of nuclear sources has surpass the advantages brought by it. First ...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...pening can bring a devastating results. Hence what matter first is the safety and wel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, so, still, well, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08791208791 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59011400846 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0970093337 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162991113479 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663808928026 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432297079756 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961181579056 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246661657602 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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