Some people think that private health care is better for people. Other say that health care should be free of charge and run by the government. How far do you agree or disagree with the given statement?
Nowadays, it is obvious that the number of unknown diseases is on the increase all over the world. Some of these illnesses are contagious and can be exchange between animals and humans so providing a descent healthcare system are crucial. A group of people believe that residents of an area should access the state healthcare, others, however, refute this. Both points of view will be discussed.
There are some persuasive arguments in favor of accessing a public healthcare. It is believed that good healthcare should be available for everyone for free, since it is paid by the government from the taxes. As an example, Health Organization Service in UK provides free healthcare for the residents. In addition, all patients can access the same treatment and cure, far from being wealthy or not. Moreover, the state hospitals are better equipped in comparison with private hospitals.
On the other hand, there are some strong arguments against the idea of charging people for treatment. Although state hospitals are large and difficult to run, private hospitals are usually smaller and can be equipped easier. Furthermore, there is a shorter waiting list in the private healthcare centers for operations and appointments which is vital for those who are suffering from diseases such as cancers or strokes and heart attacks that are debilitating. So patients can access faster treatment. In addition, patients can access the private rooms that make the environment more comfortable for them.
To conclude, accessing the free treatment is important in each society but there should be some private healthcare centers to balance the treatment services among people. This way people who need faster treatment can access it through private healthcare centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32974910394 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76057338363 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6727489867 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207943515415 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689254179064 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454513747823 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13097964551 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445350383163 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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