Some people think that sport has an important role in society. Others think it is only a leisure activity.
What is your opinion?
Give relevant reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It has always been men’s desire to have a healthy and peaceful life, which sparked a debate among masses that sports are a paramount for the wellbeing of the society; while, thwarters are with other opinions of taking it as a recreational activity. I consider that for having a well-balanced life of any individual or any society, games play a vital role and discussion for the same would be there in the upcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, reason for my belief is that sport events draw the ways to bond folks from distinct cultures, regions and backgrounds with a common goal of creating togetherness, which do bring the feeling of brotherhood among them that undoubtedly helps in strengthening the relationships between different countries. For example, in different sporting events such as Olympics, where players do come under one roof, play together and socialize with each other that help in creating a bridge of bonding among them despite being of their different identities.
Another pertinent reason for my belief is that a healthy mind and life can only be achieved by being part of sports. Masses for whom games are the part and parcel of their life; remain fit and healthy, by their active involvement in games, which helps in constructing a well-nourished and healthy individual as well as society. What is more, participation in sports teaches us to handle failures with dignity and definitely trains people to handle crunch situations such as stress.
However, sports as only recreational activity reduces the commercialization of the sports and this saves people from becoming money-making machines, which definitely help in reducing the illicit means used by sport stars to win the game; but I still feel that prominence of sports for the society's upbringing has more benefits.
In conclusion, despite the fact of taking sports as leisure activity, its benefits for society development are far more than that, which irrefutably leads any society towards the way of developing a healthy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1652173913 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89256483366 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6085158194 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.2 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130754900336 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556126532106 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285271271205 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759463458174 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290002899449 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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