In the current contemporary society, success is hard to achieve. Although some people opine that intelligence is the best method among any other factors in order to measure successfulness of a person while others believe that there is plethora of methods other than intelligence to do so. This essay will discuss why success is not the only indicator of brilliance and different ways which be used to measure it other than success.
Certain people opine that success is merely the important aspect in measuring brainpower of a person because most of the successful are found to be successful nowadays. For instance, personalities like Brak Obama, Narendra Modi, et cetera, are successful as they are very much intelligent among other candidates forming the ruling party. Also, the business tycoons like Mukesh Ambani, Bill gates and many more, are ruling the world because of their mental abilities. Since the elites from different fields are the perfect examples to illustrate the undeniable link between success and intelligence, these people believe that in order to be proved as an intelligent human, first you need to be a person with power or money.
However, other people consider other ways like self control, ability to adapt things quickly and humbleness, to be more effective in measuring the intelligence of a person as there are many folks who are intelligent but not successful. For instance, a survey conducted by World Education System in United States of America in 2017 among university students yielded a result that only 65% of them were intelligent with personal traits. Thus, personal traits contribute more towards the intelligence of a person.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why being successful is not a sign of being intelligent and other ways to measure it. However, in my opinion, intelligence can be measured by observing the personality of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85713955542 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3164686374 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374870117794 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147370108836 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101033550954 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261381746114 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749325277455 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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