Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, the subject preferences of school as well as college-going students have been changed than those were in the past. Although, there are still some people who believe that studying history is essential, while others consider it merely to be a wastage of time. this essay will discuss both the views in details and provide evidence as to why learning history is not as important as that of other subjects.
certain individuals percept that it is not important for anyone to choose history as their subject because there are no career opportunities linked to it. however, there are numerous other subjects that are responsible for a successful career of a person in order to live a successful life. For instance, most of the companies hire their employees on the basis of their education based on the subjects like mathematics, science, et cetera. The literates with the knowledge of these subjects are capable of applying in various multinational companies and different posts, but there is only one profession that can be occupied by the history students and that is, teaching. Thus, history is not a subject that contributes in the career enhancement of everyone.
On the other hand, another bunch of people opine that it is prominent to study historical events because they act as a major source of information and cultural heritage of a particular region. For example, there are numerous handlers and books covering the details about the culture of a country or the incidents occurred over there. Moreover, it gives a knowledge about the patriots who sacrificed their lives for the sake of their nation; enhancing the feeling of patriotism among them. that is why; history plays a pivotal role in expanding the knowledge of people about their societies.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why certain individuals consider history as an important subjects while others are against it. however, in my opinion, history is important for people but not as much as other subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1094224924 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7931658861 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3228859098 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19232389107 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719677271406 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743190970535 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134546728923 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797347475157 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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