Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
some individuals are of the opinion that teenage years are the cheerful times of most people's lives.However ,other are in favour that adult life create more happiness, on of responsibility. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of arguments and try to draw a conclusion.
First of all,no doubt teenage years are most enjoyable time of the life. this time comes only once in everyone's life. In that time period youth enjoyed every moment without worrying of anything. this time adolescent didn't have any responsibilities.they need not worried about money or other life struggles.adolescent age is a time when they growing fastly. At this time everyone enjoyed their school life, their study, and leisure time. Somebody focuses on their study, they are not fully engaged for doing work. In this age juvenile do not have any responsibility, moreover all people treat them with love and care. youth does not have complicated life, nonetheless they could only focus on their study. For example, when some time teen made mistakes,then all time their parents and other people ignore it or without giving any punishment they give good advice to avoid mistakes.
On the other hand, some individuals have common belief that adults age are more happiest time of life. But adults life is surrounded with so many responsibilities. they have plethora of responsibility on their shoulders, moreover adults are every time busy. If some mistake made by adults then they have penalty for it. most adult people have work stress or job related issues. they engaged all time to finished their task.they could not take any decision which is harmful of their family and community. they always treated as responsible person no one ignore their mistakes. As a result they didn't enjoy their life perfectly or how they want.
To sum up this, although it is common thought teenage years are most cheerful, relaxing, enjoying time of lives. personally, I believe that adolescent enjoy their happiest time more than the adults .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, for example, no doubt, as a result, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07878787879 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82120232451 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9765412732 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8095238095 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280523077131 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103664119021 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992796158605 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223076655311 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610949710168 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.