Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness
. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
being happy is the main goal of the life, but happiness is a hard thing to always have. however, the meaning of happiness depends on a person’s character. Some people argue that the happiest time of the life is the adulthood or the adolescence. adults differ from the teenagers with the responsibilities that they took. Therefore, it seems to me that the teenage years can be happiest time of our lives.
In the teenage years, happiness is not a thing to think about it. however, when they grow up and look back to their life, many of them believe that was the greatest times. because, many adolescents, which live with their family, must not take big responsibilities like earning money. they just have to go to the school thus waking up early can be their classic problem. In addition, they really have a huge free time to spend with their friends. For example, the teenagers can read more books than adults and they can visit more places like museums, theatres.
On the other hand, older people can be happier than young ones because of being successful in the life. For instance, they earn their own money that makes them economically independent. This independence from parents give a power to make real their dreams like travelling the world. however, the problem is having more responsibilities in the job, in the daily life and also having no time for many things. These reasons prevent adults to live a happy life as teenagers.
To summarise, happiness can change from people to people because everyone has a different character to be happy. many people discuss about the happiest time of the life is the teenage years or the adulthood. In my opinion, the teenagers are happier than adults because of not taking any responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72575168022 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526666666667 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.8156041502 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4736842105 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231377037565 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766815806436 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677427525571 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156062806045 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516280993935 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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