Climate change is one of the worst problems that the world faces today. There are others who think that initiatives of individuals to help prevent this occurrence is meaningless and think that large scale companies and the state government are the only bodies that can make a change. To my mind, action of a person is the start and that follow up by the government and other organisations is a must.
Individuals play an important role in preventing climate change. They can do this by doing even the simplest thing at the comfort of their homes like for example throwing garbages properly by segregating biodegradable from non biodegradable, reusing water used in laundries to clean cars or garages, participate in carpooling to help in minimizing traffic congestion and air pollution produced by combustion of vehicles. The citizens take the first step and everything else will follow.
Large businesses and the government, on the other hand have more resources and funds in helping the world prevent climate change. For example, they can provide bigger facilities for recycling materials segragated and collected at homes, and can produce water system that filters used water like those seen in restroom malls. Moreover, the government can implement laws or modernize existing laws with applicable punishments to those who will not abide by them. Laws like preventing smoking in public completely, higher fines to those who throw their garbage carlessly.
In my opinion, both sectors are helpful in preventing climate change. Bigger things come from small beginnings and this can be observe in this situation where each person can help in their little ways and then the big companies will play their roles by funding programs and projects in relation to minimizing climate change.
To end, both parties are needed in preventing climate change and everyone should work hand on hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, then, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21967213115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72479334825 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570491803279 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0076778683 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331397250474 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114515583974 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961824206687 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174787332203 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089573263663 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.