Some people think that they can be encouraged through sporting events like olympics. Others think that there are more better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both and give your opinion.
Today people are living a busy life where one finds hardly any time for a regular exercise. To encourage more people towards physical activities some people think that the raising euphoria of big sporting events like Olympics may do the magic while others believe that there are numerous other ways. I believe that interest in sporting events along with raising awareness about benefits of exercise and motivation from parents are necessary and this essay will discuss their role in increasing interest in exercise.
To begin with, sporting events today draw attention from people all over the world and has successfully given birth to some big heroes in sports that have inspired millions. Young or old, everyone finds their heroes and aspire to gain the physical fitness and strength like them. For Instance, the swimming star Michael Phelps successfully increased the interest of people towards swimming, which resulted in increase in number of people attending swimming classes. Rising popularity of sports has inspired children to take it more seriously and has helped draw people towards stadiums and parks.
However, these big events occur after a long wait and people need constant motivation to exercise. Masses can be encouraged to exercise through awareness programs and with the help of self-motivated parents. Doing daily exercise had many benefits that needs to be told and spread among population. Along with this, parents should take time from their busy routines and accompany their kids to park or enrol them to sports club. A daily visit to park would increase physical activity in children who otherwise find themselves hooked to television or mobile. Moreover, parents should play outdoor games with kids and draw their attention towards benefits of exercise.
To conclude, a medal for a country on a big platform like Olympics can inspire millions towards sports while encouragement and involvement of parents towards physical activities of children can make future generation return to good old ways of healthy living that existed before internet age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'finds'.
Suggestion: hardly finds
...people are living a busy life where one finds hardly any time for a regular exercise. To enc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33434650456 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51730093229 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3522947604 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254979820463 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834410454739 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731067524588 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159435877407 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064113985019 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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