Water is one of an important resource in our life without which we could not exist at all. Despite water is a huge area around the world we still need to have a fresh fluid for using in our daily routine. There are two opinions that we have to think about protection of such limited resource and, on the other hand, fresh water is all we need. I think it would be better for all people to use freshwater without control than think it is impossible to get and our government do not have to provide for our approach to freshwater how we are used to taking every day.
First of all, I want to stress, that I think we have to learn to use our fluids correctly creating new technical equipment for recleaning water on the circle base. We are modern society and have to think about our future population – instead of lack of water, we should try to find a decision for water safety.
Secondly, when we use fresh water we exactly know we are in a healthy zone that protects us from some desires and provide a high level of life. It is so significant to know that when we have to drink freshwater we increase our lifespan.
If we can imagine we have just a limited amount of water it could make us sad about our life in general. For me, it is not a good way for our century society.
In sum up all minds, I want to say that water is the resource which we have to appreciate and besides we have to utilize it rightly developing our engineering industry and combining new decisions of the safety of the environment. I am against control using water by the government due to the modern people must not get limited opportunity instead of smart developments.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Fahad Arif
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nk freshwater we increase our lifespan. If we can imagine we have just a limited a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, i think, in general, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32903225806 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44915836379 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2730487522 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220099731988 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103209632428 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603776406986 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139877111315 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620761889609 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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