Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?
Living a comfortable life in urban areas seems unrealistic nowadays. This essay intends to discuss two main problems, pollution and impure food, confronted by individuals of metropolitan cities and with governmental as well as people's efforts this situation can be ameliorated.
Pollution, be it air or noise, and the degraded quality of food are two major problems encountered by the citizens of metro cities. Burgeoning population and increasing number of factories have taken the pollution to next level which made life of citizens worst. For the sake of comfort and convenient to commute to and from their working places, everyone tends to own a personal vehicle which not only contaminates air but also produce an excessive amount of noise pollution. Metter goes worst in the case of factories which are in abundance in developed cities and produce both air and noise pollutions enormously. Moreover, in order to satisfy demand of huge population, fast food is becoming prevalent in metro cities which is considered as malnutrition food to consume. New Delhi, India's well known metro city, is witnessed highly toxic air to breathe and poor quality of food to consume. Due to these, people of New Delhi are suffering from physical and mental disorders such as obesity, weaken memory, hearing loss in early age, weak eyesight.
With the aid of government as well as participation at individual level could be proved remedial for the situation. Government should encourage industrialists to build production houses in outskirts and instead of constructing big houses, multi-story buildings should be erected to accommodate ever rising population. By installing the factories in outer areas, pollution can be restricted to enter in the city and huge space of houses can be saved. Locals should also opt public transport in their day-to-day affairs, instead of owning private vehicles, which will led them to save money and could possibly rein the environmental degradation. Las Vegas is a good paradigm for this where the local administration enacted the law of odd-even days for driving cars, societies containing multistory buildings are constructed, and every firm has to make their production plants in the outskirts. The quality of food should be inspected well before circulating it to the public. Also, for the sake of betterment of locals, those who mix food with harmful products for growing the amount of food, should be sent behind the bars.
In conclusion, it could be reiterated that ever increasing pollution and ill quality of food are two basic problems which further gives rise physical disorder among people of developed areas, I believe these can be mitigated by steps by government and initiatives by individuals themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or the sake of comfort and convenient to commute to and from their working places...
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Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
..., which will led them to save money and could possibly rein the environmental degradation. Las...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2899543379 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92556279411 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570776255708 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4343020673 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.294117647 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107795493329 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03479938217 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279197650551 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652844510774 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020601720446 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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