Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in the police force.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion among a group of people police service must not employ female gender. I totally disagree with the notion because women should have equal rights for applying for any job including police forces.
First and foremost, nowadays our society is taking course of equality of genders where everyone in spite on his sex should have the same rights for employment including military and police forces. Thus, if a woman has a desire and certain qualification she should have an opportunity to work in law enforcement. For instance, one of my former classmates graduated from a police academy and now she is successfully working in a local police office.
Secondly, womankind being more responsible and accurate, tending to obey rules more than men do. Employment of females will bring some balance to the police service, especially if they will work in pairs with males. As well as this, studies shows that women are the best bodyguards as they have a faster reaction. Thus, it will probably decrease risk during capture operations. Even working as an investigator a female officer may pay attention to some details, which a male officer can miss.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that it should be forbidden for females to work in a police service. In my opinion, both genders are equal and women can carry police duties as good as men can. Consequently, it is recommend providing job opportunity for both genders equally based on qualification of an employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 219, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recommended'.
Suggestion: recommended
...as good as men can. Consequently, it is recommend providing job opportunity for both gend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76223325949 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9984220492 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241069106622 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841510616147 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620886551562 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148513020651 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152482893948 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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