Some people think that you need more money to be happy, while others prefer to have more free time than money. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that, time and money both are equally important for everyone. While many people believe that money is more important than free time to be happy, others give priority to leisure time over money. In this essay I will elaborate both sides of the arguments and explain my support to the latter view.
On the one hand, those who prefer money over free time might argue that money can buy anything. This is because, today's era is materialism and consumerism era and if person buy any material thing, he might get happiness in that. For example, a person who has more money can buy anything from expensive things to better medical treatment. In contrast, a poor person might not get good medical treatment if he is sick. Hence, money can remove many difficulties from person's life and bring happiness.
On the other hand, my view is that people should have more free time in order to get some relaxation from their daily routine. The reason for this is that relaxation can break monotony of day to day life which can bring pleasure. For instance,, a person who has more time for friends and family is more happy than a person who has more money because this can strengthen the bond between them. However, if someone has more money and less time for family might have unstable personal life which can harm his health.
In conclusion, although some people believe that money can buy anything from material things to happiness, I prefer to have more leisure time that money to stay healthy and happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72932330827 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2624333764 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9996055201 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362181246465 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147355586483 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130778626621 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266142611705 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964910528402 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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