Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.
The internet has penetrated the global market to a extent that, cure for many health related problems can be found online. In my opinion, this could be helpful for basic solutions, but not for treatment of any medical conditions.
Nowadays, One of the most popular search done on the internet is, finding treatment for health related problems. People depend a lot on the recently developed technology to gain information and solutions for their day to day life. One of them is finding medicine for the illness. Though, this can be helpful as there are many home remedies available for improving basic health issue by using household items. For example, making herbal tea for cold and cough. But a person should not risk their health by doing so for complex or serious unwellness.
However, depending on the internet for severe health issues could be life threatening. Most of the young people, who are well educated and handy with online searches, believe that they could even search for medicines for relative sickness, but they could incorrectly judge the illness and apply wrong medicine, which could make the sickness more intense. For instance, applying an oilment for skin infection which could spread if not treated by appropiately.
Although, this advance technology can be used for understanding the illness and to learn how to avoid such circumstanses, so that it connot happen again. The internet could be considered as a useful tool for searching precautionary methods for various illness. Though, the information given on websites could be incomplete or conditional.
To conclude, in my opinion, depending on interent information for finding medicine to treat the illness could be life-treathening and cause further inconvenience to the body. Hence, one should always consult a doctor for the reliable treatment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...net has penetrated the global market to a extent that, cure for many health relat...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...lobal market to a extent that, cure for many health related problems can be found online. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27986348123 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82602512604 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4403477341 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183171766901 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732802059411 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407635289767 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113745044762 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411335423067 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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