Across the globe there are umpteen number of goods which come to the market. There are a slew of products which are produced through a machine very quickly, and on the other hand there are some items which are hand made, that takes a long time to finish. I generally prefer the handmade goods because of their uniqueness and also the enhance the life of people working on it.
Handmade things are always exquisite. Although there are many handmade products available in the market, here I would like to say about hand embroidered fabrics. The specialty about embroidery which are done by hand are the stitches and patterns that cannot be made by any other machine. For instance, the french knot and the bullion knot are the stitches that can be made only by a person. So the pattern which uses this particular stitches makes the fabric incomparable. The dress stitched out of this material will certainly make the person feel rich.
As nowadays, the embroidered dresses are in fashion, there have arrived many large scale industries that manufactures machine embroidered cloth. These cloths are produced in large numbers and are sold in higher prices in the market. But, do you think with such a high competition, people working in small scale industries who manufactures hand embroidered fabrics which takes immense effort and time will thrive? This depends on the buyers hand. Take for example, you buy a cloth worth Rs 2000/- which is machine embroidered. The same would have been repeated on other fabrics too. On the other hand, for the same amount if you go for hand embroidery, you can customize your pattern and this in turn will give an opportunity for the person working on it. Hence the small scale industries will boost up.
In conclusion, to have an unique and exquisite master piece, and also to make flourish the people working in small scale industries, handmade goods are preferable. Though it is time consuming the output is marvelous and unequaled.
- With the recent improvements to internet, people can leave views or opinion on certain goods or services they have purchased. Is it a good or a bad thing,Discuss both and give your opinion with examples. 73
- With the recent improvement to internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. it is good n=or bad thing. discuss both 73
- Some products can be made quickly by a machine. Other items take a long time to be made by hand. As a buyer, which do you prefer and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer. 56
- Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Some people like to buy new phones, new desktop or other latest devices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
...s which come to the market. There are a slew of products which are produced through ...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ds because of their uniqueness and also the enhance the life of people working on it. Ha...
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Line 5, column 756, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...portunity for the person working on it. Hence the small scale industries will boost u...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ill boost up. In conclusion, to have an unique and exquisite master piece, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91916167665 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51489342626 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517964071856 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5644045094 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4736842105 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275977796495 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733383495334 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902621022619 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148731600028 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825859887416 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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