Some say that the govt. should stop supporting the professional sports activities and the cultural performance and instead begin supporting schools to encourage children to take up sports and arts. What is your opinion?
Undoubtedly, every civilization predominantly and every nation specifically has a explicit sense of sporting and cultural predilection, and the members of such society or country propagate these inclination through their diligent interest in the connected events. They spend hefty amounts on tickets in order to watch the ceremonies live, and cherish such experiences for a lifetime.
Moreover, an essential role is played by the media which covers the entire phenomenon and provides extravagant fame to these affairs. Furthermore, the people prepare themselves for such fete as long as months before their commencement. The closer the event arrives; the popular palaver about them gets stirred. The enthusiasts accordingly streamline their schedules in order to accommodate the festival days. In addition, they persuade others to participate in such festivals.
Not only these sporting and cultural events encourage healthy competition between the members of a society, but also evade those kinds of incidents that erode the roots of the civilization. Furthermore, these are positive trends being set for the future generations to take after.
Likewise, Oktoberfest celebrated in Munich city of Bavarian Germany is an ideal paragon of such poise celebration. It stretches from sixteen to eighteen days and allures millions of people around the globe for contribution. Hence, the participants array for tickets and immortalizes their memories of the events. Apparently, Oktoberfest has flourished the tourism industry of Germany to an unexpected level.
To conclude, it can safely be deduce that it is profitable and feasible to spend money for cultural and sport festivals. It not only nourishes the positive outlook but also dominate and promote the clement perception of society world wide
- Some people argue that governments should stop supporting the professional sporting events and cultural programs and instead support schools from where students can take up sports and arts. What is your opinion? 73
- Some say that the government should stop supporting the professional sports activities and the cultural performances, and instead begin supporting schools to encourage children to take up sports and arts. What is your opinion? 78
- Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Is this good or bad thing. 89
- Some say that the government should stop supporting the professional sports activities and the cultural performances, and instead begin supporting schools to encourage children to take up sports and arts. What is your opinion? 84
- Some say that the government should stop supporting the professional sports activities and the cultural performances, and instead begin supporting schools to encourage children to take up sports and arts. What is your opinion? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'this inclination' or 'these inclinations'?
Suggestion: this inclination; these inclinations
...rs of such society or country propagate these inclination through their diligent interest in the ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...omote the clement perception of society world wide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...omote the clement perception of society world wide
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...clement perception of society world wide
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63837638376 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04150829838 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5667484232 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0639315866184 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181414822063 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329569978409 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401906208105 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361402316864 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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