Some say that music plays an important role in society while others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether music plays an important role in society or whether it is simply a form of entertainment. While I understand the reasons behind the former view, I am still in favour of the latter.
Those who believe that music is simply a form of entertainment may have several arguments. From their perspective, they do not think music plays an important role in their daily life, maybe because they do not listen to music frequently and music could not help them to be happier or they just simply find music boring.
Another possible argument is that people who believe that music is simply a form of entertainment have other ways of entertaining themself, such as watching movies, reading books, drinking, etc. So that they are more into those activities and hobbies than listening to music.
Nevertheless, I still hold the belief that music plays an important role not only in society but also in our daily life for several reasons. Chief among these is that music can make people become happier and can also boost our moods and energy. Even though it depends on our choices of what genre of music we decided to play, music can change our emotions and feelings or sometimes ago in some cases through the first beat of the song. For example, when people feel exhausted or want to give up on life, a happy song with a fun rhythm and inspirational lyrics can make them feel like reborn and it can also boost their energy.
In conclusion, I acknowledge why some may argue that music is simply a form of entertainment. However, I would take the view that music plays an important role in society for several reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7212543554 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54794618634 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7549550855 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.916666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363604544658 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142481326847 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953390218593 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228130230014 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832571175843 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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