Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Dangerous sports, widely common sports not only between athletes but also ordinary people, should be taken the highly consideration. It is noticed that many people are so attached to some games which are very dangerous. This essay will discuss firstly, some reasons behind people`s addiction to those dangerous sports, and secondly, submitting safety measures and technology ideas which can be taken to avoid its danger as the most viable suggestions.
Several types of sports and athletic games are categorized in the safe zone, but those games which are extremely dangerous seduce the gamer to practice it. Those risky games introduce to the players difference experience of feelings which are very interested to them to feel during the game. For example, a game such as skydiving is extremely risky for those ordinary people; however, they try it on several times to experience the sensation of flying without any limits. Some people after the game express that such games allow them to beat their fears and give them the ability to sustain any stresses in life. The danger can be attached to such games; nevertheless, risky games are very important for those players to continue in their lives.
Different measures depending on the kind of the game should be taken by the sport’s organization which allowing people to play those dangerous games. Minimizing the risk is the first aim; therefore, giving a comprehensive training course by certified trainers is a must for the players. This should be followed by trial sessions by using the cutting-edge technology to test and evaluate people understanding of game rules. For instance, skydiving simulator, a small closed room with big fan on the ground, is now available to test the players and gives them the similar experience before sending them on a plan for the live game. Well-trained players are far from any risk and act with more confidence during their actual sport experience.
To sum up, there are a lot of fans for dangerous games due to several reasons, but with some safety measures and well training, the danger can be eliminated to zero percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12034383954 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70081892582 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530085959885 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9453540201 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.642857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234342945063 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938319907503 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526884929665 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162813610611 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373735049417 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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